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Nan DeVincent-Hayes, Ph.D
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Morrison’s
“Paradise” Toni Morrison is consistently a good writer. But in spite of her superb
story telling skills, there are times she produces a dull plot, or a
slowly unfolding one that takes too long to jolt readers into
staying with the storyline. Paradise is like
that. It’s a story about an all Black town, Ruby, in rural
Oklahoma, where the founders are used to doing things “their
way.” Rules are laid out and the townspeople are obliged to
follow. Bursts of rebellion, ill-behavior, even creativity are not
relished. The founders
are descendants of freed slaves who govern their patriarchal
community much the same way their ancestors were undermined by the
Whites, as the Ruby residents are expected to be moral, to conform,
to become uniform in a rigid but not wealthy town. By doing this,
though the residents live in some degree of fear, Ruby-ites are
protected from others and from the activities of the world going on
around them. Ruby is the only town around for seventeen miles. At the end of those seventeen miles is another community comprised of
exiles, outcasts, nonconformists, and all women. In their “flight
from death and despair,” they are subjected to the punishment of
the “nine male citizens of Ruby “ who will “lay [upon them]
their pain, their terror, and their murderous rage.”
The terror is realized in a “convent” those seventeen
miles away. Morrison’s first line in her book is “They shoot the white girl
first.” She explains, “There are nine [men] over twice the
number of women they are obliged to stampede or kill, and they have
the paraphemalia [sic] for either requirement: rope, a palm of leaf
cross, handcuffs, Mace and sunglasses, along with clean handsome
guns.” Movement by moment, Morrison narrates a tale around these
eight women while focusing her chapters on: Ruby, Mavis, Grace,
Seneca, Divine, Patricia, Consolata, Lone, Save-Marie. It is an
interesting and well told story by the master Nobel and Pulitzer
Prize winning author. Morrison’s descriptions are unparalleled as in them we can see
the characters, and get to know them so well that we feel as though
we’re right in the kitchen with them. The tenor of the piece is a
mixture of spirit and ambience. The suspense lies heavy throughout
the story, and we become in a hurry to find out why we’re waiting
and what we’re waiting for. Morrison’s
dialogue is uncannily real making her characters all the more
familiar, life-like. Most of their conversations are short, pointed:
“The woman sighed at the stove but didn’t answer.” “‘Connie?’” “‘I’m thinking.’; Mavis looked around the kitchen that seemed to
her as large as her junior high school cafeteria.” And while Morrison makes many of her characters likeable and easy to
identify with, she’s not remiss in including the lowly and
contemptible, or those who are a mixture of both like all of us. K.D.
is one of those–a character who we don’t trust and yet don’t
quite deplore: “But it was K.D. who irritated Misner most. Too quick
to please. An oily apology. A devious smile.” What an expert Morrison is in candid characterization, lyrical language,
and suspense building. At the same token, if you like a read that rivets you to your seat, that
grounds you not in literary but rather popular writing, than this
isn’t the kind of book you want, because in spite of Morrison’s
sometimes pity and quick dialogue, her narration meanders and takes
the slow route to the end. She doesn’t tell us right upfront who the
major players are or what the plot is; instead she idly interweaves
thoughts, forcing readers to work at finding answers. It takes awhile
to figure out who’s who and what each is doing and how everyone is
connected. The action seems repressed by the language. But none of this takes away this author’s skills. Sometimes choosing
one of Morrison’s books is based simply on personal taste rather
than on raves or rants. After
all, she is a National Book Critics Circle awardee on top of her other
honors, along with being a professor at Princeton. Paradise is
a good, eloquent read, but not a fast, breath-taking one.
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